Nightmare//Loner

[Larka]

Character's Name: Nightmare

Age: 4 years old

Gender: Male

Species: Grey

Physical Description: Nightmare is an all black wolf. His fur is sleek and shiny. He has forest green eyes that have a speck of amber in the inside corners. He has a scar running across his muzzle that sticks out like a sore thumb, mostly because the fur never really grew back there and what did grow back grey back a shinny silvery grey.

Nightmare is built like a fighter,broad strong shoulders. Large powerful paws, strong hind legs, long muzzle, muscular body, ect. He's missing his left ear and half his tail.

Personality:Nightmare is just what his name suggests...a nightmare. He kills anything that angers him and won't hesitate to fight. He's a terror on four paws, quick to anger and not easy to calm until he's killed to sorce of his anger. He's not one to run from a fight, but will if he know's its a fight he can't win.

Pack: none

Rank: Loner

Other: Nightmare kills for fun. As young wolf he and his buddies went to the neighboring small packs and picked off the pups one by one until only the adults were left.

History: Nightmare was born into a small pack that killed for no reason. He was trained to be a fighter and was always a killer by nature. He was the son of the Alpha, Coldbane and had one other brother to compeate with for the title of ALpha. When the time came, Nightmare and his brother Bloodclaw fought to the death. Nightmare came out on top, killing his brother and winning the spot of Alpha to be.

Force breeding was a trend in his pack and Nightmare force bred many a she wolf until the pack split when Coldbane died. Enraged, Nightmare set out to find a pack witgh the smae bloodlust as his.

[Wolfling]

New wolf, how exciting! And he sounds truely evil . . . Love that.

First off, need another account hon. One account per character. So I'll accept this (after appropriate changes are made) but be sure to make a seperate account for him, k?

Some other things I need to point out; lacking a couple sentances in Personality. I can only see four, I need six. So lets see what else you can dish up on him.

A little something else; try to extend your second paragraph some. Maybe say how the pack was involved with the war? Were they Heus supporters? Who or what killed their alpha - or was it just old age? Just trying to thicken your character some; those are all just suggestions of course. You can add what you want.

Otherwise, I do believe you have the makings of a good character and I would like to see how much stronger you can make it.

Wolfling.

[Larka]

OOps I forgot! Why do we have to make a new account anyways?

[Wolfling]

It's just my personal way of keeping track of members - that and, in my opinion, I feel it keeps things more organized and easier to understand while posting in a thread, especially for new members. For me its just easier.

[Larka]

Sigh...ok then...I'm going to make him die in the VERY near future......like in a couple of days to at the most two weeks. Would I still have to make an account?